Every major city has one or more museums for public display. But are museums a place for mere entertainment or their sheer purpose is to educate the citizens? Some people think that they are only for gaining knowledge. However, others strongly believe that their aim is to amuse common masses. In my essay, I am going to shed some light on both the view points and share my own opinion about it.
To embark upon, the vitality of such a place is inevitable as they contain crucial information about our culture and rich history. By visiting museums we can teach our children certain important values like sacrifice, courage and patriotism by showing them the pictures of brave martyrs and respectable leaders. Indeed, it is a better way to learn history because when we see pictures and old significant artefacts we tend to develop interest and thus remember it forever.
Moreover, it is a good notion to go to museums to take a break to get de-stressed. In modern world, it is no exaggeration to state that people are tensed and frustrated because of their busy schedule and working most of the time under resounding pressure which could be nerve wracking. Hence, when a person goes to such a place, he feels relaxed and calm. Therefore, it is beneficial in rejuvenation and making an individual merry.
To recapitulate, I will have to confess that it serves both the motives since it provides wisdom and information to the society as well as it also plays a vital role in making people glad. It not only takes away all the worries fleetingly but people get to spend quality time with their families enjoying the beauty of precious pieces of art.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77003484321 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61515377109 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644599303136 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.188776304 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227760706278 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650697211293 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513594496858 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115666223354 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939903529682 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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