You just moved to a new place and haven’t gotten a chance to tell your friend. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should say:
• where and when you move there
• the differences between your new place and the previous place
• why you move there.
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you well. If you remember in my last letter, I had mentioned that I was looking for new apartment as the lease of my old apartment was due to expire and the daily commute to my workplace was challenging. Happy to share that I have found a well-furnished studio apartment on 5th Avenue of city centre, and I have moved to my new apartment on 15th December.
I am so happy that finally I have rented an apartment that has a lot of amenities like gymnasium, spa, swimming pool and a pet friendly garden compared to my old apartment that had just a garden which also was not maintained up to the standards. Additionally, my new apartment has a club where the residents can host parties and get to gather. I was thinking that I will host my birthday party this year in this club, and I think we all will have a great time.
The other good part of moving in this new apartment is that it is close to my workplace. My travel time has drastically reduce, I now reach my office in 15 minutes compared to the old one where I use to take 1 hour to travel one way. Finally, I am glad that now I get to spend more time with my dog and play violin. I was thinking if you can come and visit me next month. There are many good restaurants and night clubs near my area and I am sure we both will have a great time.
Give my regards to your parent. I look forward to hearing from you.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...rkplace. My travel time has drastically reduce, I now reach my office in 15 minutes co...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...minutes compared to the old one where I use to take 1 hour to travel one way. Final...
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Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt. I look forward to hearing from you.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15328467153 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44377610768 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1398629393 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5384615385 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130556737726 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606365985955 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470313175709 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101348977941 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535419419573 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.