You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary unpaid work in a developing country Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions which organizes such trips In your letter Explain why you want to do the voluntary work S

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You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
• Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
• State what your skills and experience are.
• Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

Dear juerg,

Hello, and I hope this email finds you well.

I recently applied for a job in switzerland, as you remember I was always dreaming to work in such a fancy country, fortunately, last night I was updated by an email from a company which I requested an interpretation position earlier. And guess what! I was happily informed that the juerg international trading holding has approved my application and I had an online interview and they were greatfully satisfied and this position by means of salary its exorbitant!

so, I have tons of questions, but first of all, what is your rough idea about it, I am asking you as you know me for such a long time and you are aware of my characteristics like your palm. I am wondering to know if this job suits me well, more specifically as I have a decent life back in my own country, and I am living here comfortably. but the more I have heard about astronimical rentals in switzerland the more it get me terrified despite the high pay job I was offered. it would be very much appreciated if you advise on this specific question.

Second, as you know well I took an intensive French language course last year, and I obtained B2 level, so it makes me more enhanced with the qualification of the needed job as an interpreter, it quite a tough job, especially when it comes to a trilingual task. but I am a jack of all trades and I just wanted to test myself in heavy task duties jobs, that why I have accepted that job!

Your very helpful advice not only makes me step strongly in this career but more importantly it gives me a broader view on my new never visited destination.

Looking forward to hearing you soon and hope to catch up with you in Lucern.

Speaking to you soon

Aboozar

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, well, you know, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 32.9175257732 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 937.175257732 153% => OK
No of words: 320.0 206.0 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4875 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76470500235 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 127.690721649 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590625 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 290.88556701 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.463917525773 1509% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.303677035 44.8134815571 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.6 76.5299724578 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 16.8248392259 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180853178605 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840021634104 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536904230426 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105717282131 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541748682992 0.0580467560999 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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