The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars?
The usage of private vehicles has raised like never before and brought problematics hassles. There are numbers of issues like air pollution, daily traffic jams and ever-growing fuel consumption are examples of such issues. for reduction of the mentioned problem, we should discourage people to drive less and substitute using their own cars with public transportation. which will be illustrated in the next paragraph respectively.
Usage of private cars is increasing dramatically. While cars are easing and facilitate daily life, their side effects such as air pollution, traffic jams, unacceptable damages to the environment, and more importantly massive consumption of fuel are among the top problematic trends of usage of private cars.
In order to reduce the above-mentioned problems made by personal cars, the government should draw more restricted rules to cap car private owners to drive more and to put extra taxation on sole driven cars captured by surveillance cameras in highways and streets. And also extra charges for fuel for those families who own more than one car not can be another way to prohibit driving private cars but also can help significantly to decrease fuel consumption.
Also, encourage car owners to use public transportation by raising public awareness with the help of media, especially the corporation of social media influencers which are widely accepted by the majority of people. Publishing escalation of air pollution daily by SMS nationwide. The more people get aware of the side effects of driving their own vehicles the less the air pollution and fuel consumption will be and more importantly, the environment starts to recover its damages caused by using private cars.
In conclusion, the government should take more responsibilities to discourage people from using their own cars by more restricted legislation to ban people to drive their own vehicles and encouraging them to use public transportation and raising their awareness about the problems caused by private cars.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ir own cars with public transportation. which will be illustrated in the next paragra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40189873418 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05212126884 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.8971191109 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.25 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336119934621 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119750199144 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10537601163 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194256561491 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646424165502 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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