The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars?
Nowadays, it is scarcely impossible to think about life without automobiles, which has become a necessity more than a luxury. But more use of four-wheeler has also raised many issues. In approaching towards these issues, this essay will discuss the various consequences of excess usage of vehicles and will encourage people to avoid private transports whenever not necessary.
Vehicles like cars, bikes have become a very important part of everyone's life and one could not think life without it. It has provided many benefits to humanity as any place is reachable to a person in lesser time with comfort. Personal vehicles have not only, lessen the dependency of man on public transports but also, saves time. Because of these benefits, people prefer cars for offices and other places. So, there came an increase in the usage of cars, which has led to many other hazards. Firstly, Air pollution is the leading challenge which our globe is facing due to the emission of carbon dioxide from the smoke of transports, which has degraded the air quality that led people towards various diseases. Secondly, Noise pollution due to constant noise and horns of vehicles which can damage physiological health. Lastly, traffic congestions due to the increase in vehicles that cause delays and wastage of time.
However, To overcome these problems, several steps should be taken to encouraging people to avoid cars. People should be encouraged to use public transportation instead of personals cars, this will also help not only, to boost up the economy but also, reduce jams and pollution. Furthermore, some rules like the odd-even rule for cars is another step toward the solution to the overcrowding of cars. Additionally, people should be encouraged to walk and avoid cars while visiting nearby places.
To encapsulate, all of this points to the conclusion that Although, increased usage of automobiles has benefitted mankind from its positive factors but, nothing came priceless so, somehow one has to pay for its negatives like pollution, traffic jams. To overcome these problems people should be discouraged to use cars and solutions like public transports, the odd-even rule should be promoted for the sake of healthy tomorrow of our planet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2320441989 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70054010947 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541436464088 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4338436363 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.411764706 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255569631046 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077830910464 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645540711512 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152653699482 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473518085251 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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