You live in a room in the college dormitory which you share with three other students. However, there are many problems with this arrangement, and you find it very difficult to study
Dear Mr. /Madam,
I am a student at college dormitory that I rented from your office.
I am writing to inform you of some serious problems that I am having with my roommates, and I would have a request.
Because I am a student and my exams will be started next week, I need a quiet place to study. But at the moment, my roommates make the room completely to a noisy place especially at night. They invite their friends every night and they are awake up to morning. In addition, I have no privacy here, I have seen several times that they check my personal belongings such as my Diary.
Finally, we rented the room in share and we should do the chores with each other, but they do not help me with them, and I usually have to clean the room alone.
I would be very grateful if you suggest another place for me to stay, at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Ghazal
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 343, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
...e seen several times that they check my personal belongings such as my Diary. Finally, we rented t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34545454545 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39670726066 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624242424242 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6313923101 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154142399764 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539575985449 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609751852943 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961243460841 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531251691365 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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