you rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students.however, there are several problems with this house that need fixing.you also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom.
Dear Sir/Madam
I'm writing to explain about some problems with the four-bedroom house that I rented before and should be fixed.
I am a student with lots of my private issues and expenses.I have to work to meet my needs by myself.But, recently there have been some problems with my house.for instance; the roof of the kitchen is leaking, the washing machine stops working, the entrance door lock is failing and there is something wrong with the bathroom taps.Unfortunately, all of them are urgent and should be fixed as soon as possible.
According to these expensive repairing and my low income and situation that I explained to you before, it would be better to share the spare bedroom with another student to decrease some of the repairing expenses.
If you could help me to find any student for that reason, I would be so thankful.
I look forward to your reply.
your sincerely
Ghazal
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sir/Madam Im writing to explain about some problems ...
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Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... lots of my private issues and expenses.I have to work to meet my needs by myself...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...have to work to meet my needs by myself.But, recently there have been some problems...
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Line 4, column 330, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unfortunately
... something wrong with the bathroom taps.Unfortunately, all of them are urgent and should be f...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...edroom with another student to decrease some of the repairing expenses. If you could hel...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
...the repairing expenses. If you could help me to find any student for that reason, I would be...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...kful. I look forward to your reply. your sincerely Ghazal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87012987013 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75352240718 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649350649351 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => OK
Sentence length SD: 133.357914401 44.8134815571 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.0 76.5299724578 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293454869397 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117456011818 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955759692248 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144830334746 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888686859722 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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