You see the following advertisement for a program designed to help improve memory.
Finding it hard to remember important facts and figures? Improve your memory in 10 weeks with our Memory Program. Places are limited. Apply now!
Dear Mr. / Madam,
I am writing with reference to your advertisement about memories enhance.
My short-term memory has faced some problems recently. I forget the numbers, people name or the place of things where I put them there before, and I usually have to waste much time to find them. Unfortunately, these are significant issues that have affected my everyday life and activities.
When I saw your public announcement, I had been hopeful and curious about your program that how it could help people to remember better and make them experience amnesia later. So I decided to participate in this 10 weeks program as soon as it possible.
Now, could you please give me some information about the registration, program performance date, place or any including fees?
I look forward to your reply and would be appreciated if I could register and pass this beneficial program.
Yours faithfully,
Ghazal
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12080536913 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89923361521 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.738255033557 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4394994211 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7777777778 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230699643249 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082453262915 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445558233638 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117408723524 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459070123853 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.