Nowadays, celebrities are more famous for their glamor and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.
According to the celebrities' remarkable progress over several decades, it is clearly distinct that a large majority of people, who want to go overnight a centuries-old way, follow the celebrities. So increasingly, young people have strongly disposed towards being fame.
For instance, actors and singers, there are multitudes amateurs besides considerable attributes just due to their parent's possession or successful records rather their diligence or qualifications. Regardless of an amount of their efforts, this community has had a distinguished position and have also gained a significant amount of money among all other segments of society during the centuries. Nowadays the youth who want to be known to the world, prefer to imitate celebrities and severely corroborate them. It is argued that anyone should employ their own opportunities. Someone utilize their parent's competence and endeavor. In addition, these communities might create more chances for the others and more substantial promotion in their work field. Moreover, the others can benefit their own qualifications. It is stated that there are adequate occasions for both groups, so it is fair indeed.
However, there are a number of reasons supporting the contradictory. First, it is not indispensable that any publicity is simply because of wealth and attractiveness. Considering literary celebrities, Inventors, The greats and the other fame, a large number of people who had not been rich and famous, but they could be of the best in the world and obtain a diversified amount of honors. In addition, perhaps people appeared to be successful due to their glamor or wealthy for a short time, but finally, people with their competence and achievements will attain great success and will remain lasting and eternal. So young people must not force their families to support them to achieve fame by using any possible means.
In conclusion, although it is inevitable the mankind's fondness to notability and wealth, and also theses are important factors in life, but the youth should take the other items into consideration, such as capacity, perseverance, Power and knowledge acquired and innate and reasonable family supporting. But we need to consider that are these factors sufficient to be well-known over the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'utilizes'.
Suggestion: utilizes
...employ their own opportunities. Someone utilize their parents competence and endeavor. ...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ventors, The greats and the other fame, a large number of people who had not been rich and famous...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41456582633 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06124149001 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59943977591 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0546697482 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.705882353 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253416560029 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715573391554 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544716782659 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120367826364 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917330665771 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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