You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear sir,
I am writing to draw your attention to the issues arising due to shared accommodation with a room-mate. I have been allocated with a room on 26th Dec 2020 in the college and my room number is 334 on the third floor.
I am living with Anna but I have found couple of problems. she usually slept late at night and turned on the music for the night and kept the tube lights on while I am sleeping. I have to prepare my lessons and assignments, but I have found her resistant to understand my situation. she sometimes annoyed me a lot by concealing my stuff. I have the evidence that she has done that, because I have a video-recording on the hidden camera in situ.
Despite of warning her about the bad habits, she did not take a notice of it and never tried to coöperate with me. I have been living with her but found it so difficult to live in. I could not scored well in my quiz and mid-terms.
Now, it is the time for my final exams and I do not want to repeat the same grades. I am requesting you to change my accommodation and transfer me to another room on the same floor.
it will be highly appreciated if you take a notice and transfer me to another room before my finals.
Waiting for your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... room number is 334 on the third floor. I am living with Anna but I have found ...
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...rd floor. I am living with Anna but I have found couple of problems. she usu...
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...a but I have found couple of problems. she usually slept late at night and turned ...
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...ns and assignments, but I have found her resistant to understand my situation. sh...
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... resistant to understand my situation. she sometimes annoyed me a lot by concealin...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'score'
Suggestion: score
...it so difficult to live in. I could not scored well in my quiz and mid-terms. Now, it...
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...equesting you to change my accommodation and transfer me to another room on the s...
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...me to another room on the same floor. it will be highly appreciated if you take ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, third, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29831932773 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59193299652 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542016806723 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8242395388 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0714285714 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169072897347 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556545937833 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623865873997 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903461096196 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615661843657 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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