Some celebrities say that their private lives shouldn’t come under media scrutiny. Other people, however, believe that they should accept it as part of their fame.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is in a human's instincts to become a renowned personality, either in public or in family. famous people have made a choice of being prominent among societies, so it has been suggested by some that media owns a right to intervene in their private matters. If i had to suggest my opinion, i would definitely disagree with this view point as there must be restrictions on sharing someone's life experiences and rules ought to be applied in order to keep peace in the world.
Every individual who wants to be highlighted in the community, have to suffer from many hurdles. Popular celebrities may become a fashion icon, musician , politicians, sportsman and so on, all of them have been considered to be the public property. either they have been enjoying family time or attending the personal dinner, have been watched by public or social resources such as news reporters, fans and followers. For instance; news reporters have been noticed to interrupt in personal affairs of celebrities, even they misuse their physical features to gain ratings and views of their channel.This trend leads to a bad impression in public and play a significant role to scandalise those celebrities.
As a consequence of populairty, celebrities have to face lot of public pressure; in order to make a good impression in people's perspective they have to struggle hard to make their place in the society. I would suggest it is the responsibilty of the government to apply restrictions on sharing private information of celebrities. As everyone has a right to make their own choices in their personal lives and any breach of information must be reported either it has been made by fans, electronic media or social media. Viewers must be focused on their own deeds rather than showing keen interest in others matters, as it may lead to an indecent and humonguous individuals rather than responsible citizen of a society.These public icons unintentionally became notorious, dealt with heavy debt, accused of conviction, have to suffer from anxiety, depression and subsequent psychiatric problems, unknowingly destroying their life due to fake news broadcasted by media. For instance; Mark weins once had been kept in prison for three months as a consequence of misbehaving with his follower while attending a birthday party of his daughter; a fake news though.
To conclude; although famous individuals have endorsed with luxuries of life; however, media play an impactful role in their success. One of the responsibilites of the higher authorities is to implemet regulations regarding news that are broadcasted through media and these platforms ought to be discouraged any interruption in celebrities personal lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2265.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19495412844 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0814343165 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538990825688 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 715.5 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0448219046 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.785714286 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1428571429 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147781014081 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054363017966 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491709072115 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953724083989 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316621650305 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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