On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
Describe the item you lost
Explain how you lost it
Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear sir,
I am writing to draw your attention the valuable that I have lost last saturday and I required you to consider the item in my insurance account to cover its cost.
I embarked my journey to Stratford station via train services The victoria lane for half an hour. I had held a black bag in my hand and sat down in the front lane of the tube. Promptly, I realized my cell phone was ringing and I picked up my call while placing my hand carry at the seat next to me. Soon after that I left the train as my station arrived and unfortunately, I forgot to pick up the bag.
After leaving the bus I have tried to find it by contacting the customer service department, but all in vain. my bag contained an Acer company 23*24" blue laptop and some official documents. There are some essential files stored in the laptop of the project and some paper work related to inventory control. Now you can realize how much valuable those belongings were for me?
To some how, I have managed to retrieve the data, but I want to purchase another laptop so that I can continue to work on that project again. Currently, I ran out of money to buy a new one for me, so I need your assistance to cover the cost in my insurance account and credit me equivalent amount so that I will have a new possession like that. In this letter, I am providing you the receipt of previous laptop that can help you how much amount should be transacted, my bank details, and insurance number to credit my account.
I am looking forward for a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...er service department, but all in vain. my bag contained an Acer company 23*24&apo...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...ble those belongings were for me? To some how, I have managed to retrieve the data, b...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 290.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38965517241 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52201012633 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2020407748 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9230769231 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206057628132 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670830617786 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993303615753 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126718807977 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145136569572 0.0580467560999 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.