Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it compared with other drugs.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?
tobacco consumption is quite common these days. one school of thought believes that it is a drug and its use should be banned as others drugs do. However, some people consume it without any restrictions. In my opinion, tobacco has detrimental health effects and its public use should be banned.
First of all, health is a great wealth. if one would spoil it's health by using these drugs, then it may lead to many health problems. For instance, since tobacco consumption can lead to addiction , the export and import in the U.K has been considered as illegal. if someone had caught red-handed, they may have to end up in prison or have to pay heavy fine upon their criminal activities.
Secondly, the consumption of these kind of products comes with lethal health concerns. For example, lung and heart diseases are prevalent including asthma, shortness of breath, continuous cough, lung cancer, stroke and myocardial infarctions and so on. Thus, it may lead to never-ending vicious cycle of diseases.
As a result, the more they are exposed to tobacco smoke, the higher the probability to become vulnerable to diseases. Moreover, it does not only come with occurence of multiple diseases, but also the life span of the drug abuser become shorter.
Thirdly, it doest not only have above mentioned concerns, but I have noticed the other societal issues the drug abuser can cause. For instance, it may lead to a society in which citizens become more prone to involve in other criminal activities such as, young ones may become robbers, smuggling of narcotics, alcohol consumption, and gambling.
On contrary, those who reckon that it's use shouldn't be banned, may have a perspective that lower amount of its consumption should not be unlawful. since to satisfy their craving due to exposure to the drug, they argue that our air pollution contains same amount of smoke and lethal gases, as we are consuming on the daily basis; a lame excuse though!
Another, argument they suggest that the percentage of tobacco smoke consumption should be limited, to minimise the risks associated with over consumption.
To sum up, I suggest that tobacco is a drug. one can not ignore the negative influence it has on the health of drug abuser. Furthermore, the more they are exposed to these products, the higher the chances to become addicted. Hence, it's consumption should be banned publicly. At the end, it is the need of the hour to save our lives and to get rid of those products that can destroy the entire community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2092.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93396226415 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64013840468 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6902858627 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0909090909 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229087378589 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673542499412 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670496311819 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106296511728 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836959224799 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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