Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
thank them for the holiday and the photos
explain why you didn’t write earlier
invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Jennifer,
I hope you have had an amazing weekend. it has been a pleasure meeting you at your house.
I have received holiday photos you have sent me through post this Monday. thanks for sending me the pictures and for inviting me to stay at your residence during holidays. it was an unforgettable holiday experience this time with you at Turkey. The photographs are mesmerizing and took me back in time of those marvellous scenes at beach and fun time with you guys. Ah! how lucky am I for having such wonderful mates who care and love me beyond the limits of this horizon.
Apart from that the reason for writing you so late is that I have had two urgent meetings with my new client and I was busy in the completion of a project. The project has provided me a chance to show my valuable skills and to prove my abilities.it was a crucial time for my career as my company has offered me a higher place after seeing my progression.
As I have been offered for a project manager place , so I am glad to invite you guys to come at my house to celebrate this event and stay with me on last weekend of June from 28th to 31st june.
These days are very important for me and I would like to celebrate it with my friends and family so that I can thank them for the support they have provided me throughout my career.
I will see you soon!
Warm wishes,
Mehwish
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...I hope you have had an amazing weekend. it has been a pleasure meeting you at your...
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Suggestion: Thanks
... have sent me through post this Monday. thanks for sending me the pictures and for inv...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...stay at your residence during holidays. it was an unforgettable holiday experience...
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Suggestion: How
...t beach and fun time with you guys. Ah! how lucky am I for having such wonderful ma...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...been offered for a project manager place , so I am glad to invite you guys to come...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31782945736 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39682213344 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562015503876 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7659160022 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29063557004 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133164278963 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705283676043 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164502408716 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727895526854 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.