Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
- thank them for the holiday and the photos
- explain why you didn't write earlier
- invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Raj,
I’m writing this letter to thank you for providing a place to stay at your house during our holiday in Dubai. Moreover, I’ve received the photos that you have sent. I liked them.
I didn’t write to you before because I was so busy with my civil exam. Also, my mom was sick during an exam, so I was quite busy with taking care of her. Now, everything is well and perfect.
Furthermore, I would like to give you good news that I have passed my civil exam. I’ve got second place in my province. I have spent too much time preparing for this exam and my parents are happy with the result I’ve achieved. Therefore, my school is organizing an award program for me so that I am inviting you to attend this ceremony. Don’t worry about a place to stay, you can stay at my house. I will be happy to see you there, not only me but also my parents will be excited to see you around.
Take care,
ABC
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...excited to see you around. Take care, ABC
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, second, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26857142857 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15871465914 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6198287745 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.4615384615 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4615384615 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291303800386 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101964658299 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099735837214 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241777161861 0.12726935374 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158759318422 0.0580467560999 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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