You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.
-write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college and ask
-for a new room next term
-you would prefer a single room
-explain your reasons.
Hello Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regard to my accommodation.
My name is Tomasz I am second year student of the University of Sydney, I have been living at your campus since beginning of my studies. I share my room with the other first year student and since he has moved in, I am not happy about the way that our room has changed. This term is extremely hard for me and I must spend a lot of time on the books to preparing for the exams. Besides, he is constantly inviting his new friends to our apartment. I have already tried to talk with my roommate about the situation but, that did not help at all.
I would like to know is it possible to relocate me to the single room. That could be very helpful for me to study.
I would appreciate if you could consider my request.
Regards,
Tomasz Zawadzki
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3821656051 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40266732112 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624203821656 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.771252494 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19195857176 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684355641011 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559363820341 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128441346845 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532966522765 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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