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Dear sir or madam, my name is saad, and I live in room no.200.I want to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate.actually, I facing an unavoidable problem every day.
first of all, my roommate doesn's care about changing his clothes and cleaning his mess, which makes the smell of the room terrible.over that the space of the room not enough for both of us, which makes me study in a library every night.roommate used to bring his friend to this narrow room! which makes the problem gets complicated.the study time not matching for both of us, which is mean he needs to study while I need to sleep.Another point there is no big windows let the sunlight gets in the room, which drives us to turn on the electrical light twenty-four hours a day.
finally, I hope from you to shift me to another room, with roommate have same study hours and same levels, because I want to share my new roommate the experience and help each other on homework. thank you
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n officer at the college. In the letter: - Describe the situation. - Explain yo...
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...rience and help each other on homework. thank you
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, however, if, while, at least, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5486381323 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.50674273945 2.54303337028 335% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599221789883 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.856517053 44.8134815571 350% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.6 76.5299724578 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.29896907216 256% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454919804752 0.216113520407 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209976590535 0.0766984524023 274% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158604955307 0.0603063233224 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160944750175 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.204863573525 0.0580467560999 353% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 8.37731958763 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 8.71597938144 175% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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