You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,•describe the sit

Dear sir or madam, my name is saad, and I live in room no.200.I want to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate.actually, I facing an unavoidable problem every day.

first of all, my roommate doesn's care about changing his clothes and cleaning his mess, which makes the smell of the room terrible.over that the space of the room not enough for both of us, which makes me study in a library every night.roommate used to bring his friend to this narrow room! which makes the problem gets complicated.the study time not matching for both of us, which is mean he needs to study while I need to sleep.Another point there is no big windows let the sunlight gets in the room, which drives us to turn on the electrical light twenty-four hours a day.

finally, I hope from you to shift me to another room, with roommate have same study hours and same levels, because I want to share my new roommate the experience and help each other on homework. thank you

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
...name is saad, and I live in room no.200.I want to express my dissatisfaction with...
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Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...satisfaction with my roommate.actually, I facing an unavoidable problem every day...
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Suggestion: First
...ng an unavoidable problem every day. first of all, my roommate doesns care about c...
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Suggestion: Which
...o bring his friend to this narrow room! which makes the problem gets complicated.the ...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Another
...he needs to study while I need to sleep.Another point there is no big windows let the s...
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Suggestion: Finally
...rical light twenty-four hours a day. finally, I hope from you to shift me to another...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'studied'.
Suggestion: studied
...o another room, with roommate have same study hours and same levels, because I want t...
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Suggestion: Thank
...rience and help each other on homework. thank you
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, if, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59302325581 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81493832468 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6804123711 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 16.3608247423 348% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.868347759 44.8134815571 464% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.333333333 76.5299724578 344% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.3333333333 16.8248392259 341% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.3333333333 4.34317383033 376% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170849059495 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127623274398 0.0766984524023 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504733774942 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115176276199 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435137849937 0.0580467560999 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.9 8.37731958763 345% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 70.7449484536 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 7.45979381443 311% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.23 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 8.54432989691 290% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 8.15463917526 356% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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