Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to an advertisement published in today's daily "The New Paper". As per the article, I understand that the project manager from National Environmental Agency (NEA) is looking out for potential candidates who can volunteer for public service. Hereby, I wish to apply for this opportunity from my zone.
Let me take this opportunity to introduce myself from Jurong East Zone 3. I have been residing in this area over a decade now and am very familiar with all the recent issues that the residents are facing lately. Recently, due to heavy downpour we have noticed an accumulation of dirty water near the Housing Development Board society. Also, kids have started playing in this puddle. This has dire consequences on health conditions of the residents residing nearby. Despite numerous feedbacks, there is no response from your side to this situation. We understand due to other pressing matters, there has been certain delays in repair works. Therefore, I wish to support and assist you so that this situation can be improved immediately.
Looking forward for your swift response.
Yours faithfully,
Nur Amirah
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24867724868 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83136519612 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.102826414 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3076923077 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143903377528 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046853115609 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046322361872 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094602198334 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290053947606 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.