You missed an appointment for an immigration interview recently because of circumstances
out of your control.
Write to the immigration office. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Apologise for missing your appointment
• Explain what happened
• Request a new appointment
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to appologize about an important appointment that I missed on 21th of July.
My name is Rahi Honarvar, and I have applied for immigration to Australia on August 2016. After completeing the application form and fullfilling the essential processes I could manage an interview with the immigration department of Australia wich was set for the 21th of July.
I am extremely sorry for not being able to show up on the mentioned date and I know that it could bring you some inconveniences.
As I mentioned in my application form, I am the residant of Mashhad which is located in North-East of Iran in the province of khorasan which is 900kms away from the capital city of Tehran in which the immigration office is located. I booked a flight to Tehran a day before my appointment with the migration department but unfortunately, due to the bad weather conditions all the flights were canceled and consequently I missed my appointment.
I would be grateful if you could set me another appointment. I am looking forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 62, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f you could set me another appointment. I am looking forward to your response. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92553191489 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12972142199 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601063829787 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0720969105 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.888888889 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222914270293 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888398916645 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428067114118 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10790662128 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465314218441 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.