You need to attend a family event. Your child will be missing school for a day. Write a letter to the school principal and say–
1- What is the event?
2- Why is it important for your child to be there?
3- How will your child make up
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to inform you that my son won`t be able to attend the school day on next Monday due to our commitment with a family occasion.
I invited my parents to stay with us during this month, and they will arrive the city this Sunday. When I was doing all my parents` visit arrangement, I realized that their wedding anniversary is on the coming Monday. Hence, I invited all other family to celebrate this special occasion with them. It will be an extremely memorable moment with a sentimental value to my parents
I have read that attending family events are very important for children, and they understand many values out of it. Therefore, it will be an amazed chance to spend some quality time with his grandmother and grandfather. My son will learn also that love continues ever after between a couple.
Some lessons will be missed on Monday, but I can taut it to my son at home. I would therefore request that you tell me the Monday lessons and any other home work need to be done to enable him catch it up with the next school day. It will be very useful to not miss any lesson with his class.
I look forward to receiving the lessons list.
Yours sincerely,
Ayoub
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssons list. Yours sincerely, Ayoub
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62100456621 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48694596472 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625570776256 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2197453603 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234138478962 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827824249667 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578840436304 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110624914141 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698482457354 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.