You need to seek admission in a short course. write a letter to the admission officer.
In your letter, you should:
what the course is
how your background knowledge is related to this
why this institute is important.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Valli, and I am writing to obtain enrollment in an accelerated course of 8 weeks from your esteemed institution. Since my vacation begins in a week, I could use it to enhance my knowledge.
Firstly, I am interested in learning Advanced Diploma in Web Designing. By pursuing this course I will be able to do impressive graphic designs and also manage the web pages more efficiently for the company I am working in, thereby, my promotional opportunities would increase.
Moreover, I did a Diploma course in Web Designing, so I have the necessary basic knowledge to do this advanced training. Since working in an IT company for 5 years gives a practical experience regarding most aspects of Web scripting.
Doing this training from your prestigious institute is vitally essential for me because I have heard a lot about the constructive teaching methods of your faculty. Hence, I am sure that I will gain the most effective and up-to-the-minute knowledge by completing this class from your institute.
I am looking forward to attending classes at your centre.
Yours faithfully,
Valli
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 139, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...his advanced training. Since working in an IT company for 5 years gives a practical e...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 145, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...vanced training. Since working in an IT company for 5 years gives a practical experienc...
^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to attending classes at your centre. Yours faithfully, Valli
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24456521739 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1415864173 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2200156189 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144155966701 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610096303804 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444680375255 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736240108174 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369840032538 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.