You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this.
Describe your purchase order of the book.
Explain the importance of the book.
Say what you what the company to do for you.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about the book titled: 'Prepare for IELTS', which I have ordered in the last month. It has to be arrived by this monday as per the delivery policy.
The book was on a hefty discount and includes the cirriculum that I need to prepare for my upcoming exam in the next month. Some of my friends learned from this book and it helped them to achieve the desired score required for the admission in the university program. In addition, I need to appear for the test soon to submit my application to college with IELTS score.
However, I am able to arrange the book from my friends for time being. I would like to cancel the order for this book. I am attaching the bill number and the cash memo for your reference.
I am waiting to hearing from you soon.
Your Faithfully
Apoorva Chikara
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this monday as per the delivery policy. The book was on a hefty discount and inc...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of my friends learned from this book and it helped them to achieve the desired sc...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d the cash memo for your reference. I am waiting to hearing from you soon. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51948051948 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35509373922 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0795342859 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328139542333 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121113655238 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847908737825 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181475002794 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693468718235 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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