You ordered a book online for exam preparation It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book Write a letter to the e commerce company about this Describe your purchase order of the book Explain the importance of the

Essay topics:

You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this.

Describe your purchase order of the book.

Explain the importance of the book.
Say what you what the company to do for you.

Dear Sir,

I would like to draw your attention towards non-delivery of order no : 123456789 dated 4th April 2019 through online mode. I understand your company policy for delivery of product within 15 working day.

Firstly, please consider the vitality of my order. It contains my CFA level II question bank together with Texas BA II calculation. CFA level II exam are scheduled on coming 17th June. Question bank ordered contains over 10000 question, which necessitates a second round of revision ahead of appearing for exam.

Moreover, Texas BA II calculator is a special purpose financial calculator and one of mandatory requirements of CFA exam. We need to practice a quite a long practice to manage enough familiarity with it. I am left with less than a month time to prepare for exams.

Considering the significance of contents of order, I request you to send it through airmail, which requires two day delivery time. Additional charges levied for airmail mode of delivery can be added to my invoice and will be paid upon delivery.

I shall be highly thankful for your support to arrange the necessary.

Yours’ sincerely

Gurmeet Singh

Votes
Average: 9.5 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... levied for airmail mode of delivery can be added to my invoice and will be paid ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15263157895 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8040840805 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705263157895 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5934251184 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3076923077 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176881418234 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595666788978 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438012854928 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872502429701 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317527496077 0.0580467560999 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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