You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say
what was the item .
why it was important that you get it immediately.
what you suggest the company should do now.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about a delay in delivery of an office equipment which I had ordered from your company website. According to the website, it should have been delivered the next day, however, I have still not received the item.
Let me explain in detail. My laptop broke down a week before an important presentation and I placed an order for the same model on your website. Since, the delivery was within 24 hours, it would not hamper my work. Failing to receive the laptop in time has put my work in a jeopardy. Also, the end date of my project is nearing and I need to complete my work before the deadline.
Request you to please look into this matter urgently and deliver my item at the earliest. Additionally, could you please send me a spare laptop while you simultaneously resolve my issue.
I look forward to an immediate reply and quick action from your end.
Yours Faithfully,
Maryann
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73493975904 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.565388164 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668674698795 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9142689017 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4545454545 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253350903493 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078890775505 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864332167417 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144252631559 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115657140495 0.0580467560999 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.