In recent times, technology has boomed and it has helped us in making our lives easier and convenient. many traditional mediums have been replaced by computers. As such, some believe that in today's era, computers should replace libraries as they are redundant and a huge waste of resources namely, space and paper. While another school of though disagrees with this idea. This essay shall discuss both views and give an opinion.
Firstly, many books can be stored on, as well as, searched on the computer due the availability of internet. Everyone these days has access to the internet and can find the book they want just at the tip of their fingertips. Secondly, physical books undergo a lot of wear and tear over a long period. However, that is not the case with books available online. Thirdly, many books are unavailable in print form since, authors these days are releasing only online versions of their books. online books are also highly in demand. For example, according to a recent study ten million books were sold online as compared to two million physical books. As a result, fewer people are frequenting the libraries and hence it is advisable to shut them down.
On the othe hand, some are of the view that computers cannot replace the feeling of reading a physical book. they argue that the best way to enjoy reading is to experience the process. For instance, the smell of the paper , turning of the page, feeling the book, etc. Therefore, libraries are of paramount importance as these cannot be experienced while reading a digital version.
Keeping the aforementioned points in mind I believe that everything is moving toward digitization and libraries should follow suit. Although, the feeling of holding a book is unmatched, people need to adapt to changes and try to be on par with technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92207792208 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57920478359 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600649350649 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7696292325 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7894736842 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2105263158 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.89473684211 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164810207407 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469121001031 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712164958085 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106476657433 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769247757744 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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