YOU ORDERED A NEW CHEQUE BOOK FROM YOUR BANK TWO WEEKS AGO BUT YOU HAVE RECEIVED NOTHING.
WRITE A LETTER TO THE MANAGER COMPLAINING ABOUT THE BAD SERVICE.
- SAY WHEN AND HOW YOU ORDERED IT.
- ASK HOW MUCH LONGER YOU WILL HAVE TO WAIT AND ASK THE MANAGER WHAT ACTION HE WILL TAKE OVER THIS MATTER.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about none receipt of the cheque book i applied for at your branch at broad street area on lagos Island. Also, seeking your timely intervention in redeeming the bad service experienced.
The cheque book was requested for at your branch at number 214 broad street, Lagos last about a month ago and your staff that attended to me advised she will contact me within two weeks to pick up the cheque book. However, it is over a month and i am yet to receive a follow-up call or mail from any member of your team. also, I sent an enquiry mail to your customer service centre to confirm status of my request last week and the mail was not acknowledged nor replied till date hence the need for me to escalate to you.
It will be appreciated if you can investigate this urgently with your team members and make sure the delivery of the cheque book to my office within 24hours without any further delay.
Hoping to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
James Igwe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about none rece...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n about none receipt of the cheque book i applied for at your branch at broad str...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e book. However, it is over a month and i am yet to receive a follow-up call or m...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...l or mail from any member of your team. also, I sent an enquiry mail to your custome...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thin 24hours without any further delay. Hoping to hearing from you soon. You...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from you soon. Yours faithfully, James Igwe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60989010989 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36887115255 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0441033448 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.875 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195972316456 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877086534388 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444616806337 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131354274815 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314278053131 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.