you and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.write a letter to the restaurant manager. in your lettergive details of your visit to the restaurantexplain the reason for

Essay topics:

you and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
write a letter to the restaurant manager. in your letter
give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for celebration
say what was good about the food and the service.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to commend your staff of the professional skills displayed during my visit with my friends last weekend. I must say the local delicacies- pounded yam and vegetable soup was delicious.

All staff showed professionalism from the gate man to the cleaners. We arrived at Protea Hotel at exactly 2:00pm and the courteous greetings from the gate men till the waiters was impressive. We came because we just received congratulations message from our organization on our promotion to the next grade and was at the restaurant to celebrate the occasion.
The most memorable thing about the food is not just that it was sweet but local leaves was used in wrapping it. Also, the employees were so warm and willing to help. Even with our high noise levels we were still tolerated. Also, we received complementary chocolates and ice cream at no extra cost.

I was really impressed and would visit your restaurant again soon. Please keep up the good work.

Yours faithfully,

Ifeoluea Aransiola

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03550295858 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81004664947 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3834426575 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9166666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167614172327 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571445273069 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475313059355 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980271323631 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366379340836 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.