YOU ORDERED A NEW CHEQUE BOOK FROM YOUR BANK TWO WEEKS AGO BUT YOU HAVE RECEIVED NOTHING.
WRITE A LETTER TO THE MANAGER COMPLAINING ABOUT THE BAD SERVICE.
- SAY WHEN AND HOW YOU ORDERED IT.
- ASK HOW MUCH LONGER YOU WILL HAVE TO WAIT AND ASK THE MANAGER WHAT ACTION HE WILL TAKE OVER THIS MATTER.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about none receipt of the cheque book i ordered for at your branch at broad street area on Lagos Island. Also, seeking your timely intervention in redeeming the bad service experienced.
The cheque book was requested for at your branch at number 214 broad street a month ago and your staff promised I will be contacted within two weeks to pick it up. However, it is over a month and i am yet to receive a follow-up call or mail from any member of your team. In addition, I sent an enquiry mail to your customer service centre to confirm status of my request last week and the mail was neither acknowledged nor replied. this is a service failure.
Please investigate this urgently with your team and revert on the your findings. Finally, ensure the cheque book is delivered not later than 24hours from now because i will be traveling for vacation next week.
Hoping to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
James Igwe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... broad street a month ago and your staff promised I will be contacted within two ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... it up. However, it is over a month and i am yet to receive a follow-up call or m...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...l was neither acknowledged nor replied. this is a service failure. Please investi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...investigate this urgently with your team and revert on the your findings. Finally...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'your'?
Suggestion: the; your
... urgently with your team and revert on the your findings. Finally, ensure the cheque bo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cheque book is delivered not later than 24hours from now because i will be trave...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ot later than 24hours from now because i will be traveling for vacation next wee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76608187135 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49790446014 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654970760234 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2972708826 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177965116435 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670992937391 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479361512009 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119720168741 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328786976184 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.