Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe that other family members can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent times, husband and wife now tend to work to support the home. A school of thought suggests that its better for relations to look after their children while others suggest that children should be looked after at child care centers. In my opinion, I think where a child should be kept depends on the age of a child, this is because both options have advantages which would be discussed below.
On the one hand, the benefits of leaving children in the care of family member is that it is cost effective and secure. Parent would not need to pay extra for a child school fees, this is because the child would be home all through the day. Money saved could be used in other ventures, such as buying food items or cloths. other members looking after a child is also more safer. The childwould be saved romr contacting communicable diseases, especially in their early age when they are still young and their immunity is low.
On the other hand, taking a child to childcare centres help them be independent and learn other people's culture. A child would be independence when they are allowed to be on their own, they would know how to do things, make mistakes and learn from their own mistakes. also, they would learn others people's way of doing things ranging from the food their eat, the way they talk, and so on.
In my opinion, I think the age of the child should determine who should care for them. At their formative years, between the ages of zero to five years, they should be left under the care of other family members. who would show them warmth and love. However, when a child is about eight years and above, they should be sent to school, to be tutored by teachers who are versatile in different field. they would also mix with children from other background and learn their ways of life. Afterall, life is beyond a home front.
In conclusion, the workplace is evoluing with more women picking up full-time jobs like their husband. I think the decision of who should look after a child should be determined by the parend depending on the age of the child and also should not be left completely in the hands of relations or child care centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, still, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59230769231 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24712688209 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494871794872 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7743496019 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2631578947 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176496160453 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626966506641 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479607802915 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108787073953 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451078298979 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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