you and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
write a letter to the restaurant manager. in your letter
give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for celebration
say what was good about the food and the service.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to commend you and your staff for the delicious delicacy and the excellent customer service displayed during our visit last week. I came with my friends to Jenvik restaurant.
To start, one of my friend- Jane just got a job offer at Shell Nigeria and he wanted to celebrate with friends and family hence our visit on Friday September 20,2018. So, we googled online for different Chinese restaurants and your place was picked.
Commendably, I must say, the cuisines served looked as good as the pictures on your website and the quantity and quality of food was impressive. The food tasted good .Also, the staff were friendly, warm and looked neat . They did not request for any tip after we had our meals, these skills are not common in recent time.
Personally, I would visit your restaurant in the future and would keep recommending the place to friends and family. Kindly keep up the good work, more grease to your elbow.
Yours faithfully,
James Jude
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd your staff for the delicious delicacy and the excellent customer service displ...
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Line 11, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ood was impressive. The food tasted good .Also, the staff were friendly, warm and ...
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Line 11, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...d was impressive. The food tasted good .Also, the staff were friendly, warm and look...
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Line 11, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...taff were friendly, warm and looked neat . They did not request for any tip after ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90588235294 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43581116263 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682352941176 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9691200699 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267566775196 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092524469179 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407152280195 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144824465716 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377486825089 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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