Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.
How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?
Nowdays, television, radio, newspaper and so on, are everywhere. In my opinion the media influences the people's beliefs and influence the morals of children. I disagree that the down sides outweighs the advantages.
The most important way the media influence the society is that it influences a persons behaviour. people learn from the shows, programmes, movies, news and discussions they watch on the media. They make assumption based on what they see, and what is obtainable in the society about a subject. For example, a movie story about Hausas having multiple wife. In reality, Hausas always marry more than one wife corroborating the story.
Furthermore, the media influences the moral of children, they could be easily influenced and may adopt bad moral. This may be by watching some programmes on the television. To illustrate, a child who sees a man and a woman kissing on the television may also want to try it out with friends or siblings.
However, I think the media offers more advantages such as learning, people can be aware of the happening in the country. This information helps us stay current with latest happening across the globe. For example, children could watch mathematical competition shows on the television to build and develop themselves for their future. also, the media provide entertainment to the people. people get to watch the television and relax after a long days work.
In conclusion, the media has been a good development in recent times. I think the benefit is more than the any threat to a childs morality it may pose, by ensuring parental guidance at all time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06367041199 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81978449792 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0969819929 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.1111111111 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223113204295 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649351943422 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438673964609 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116733842937 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370164045869 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.