In recent times it has become a trend that both parents go to work. Some working parents are of the view that no one else can look after their children better than a family member while others think they can be well cared in a child care center. This essay will throw light on both views and extend by support to the latter before arriving at a conclusion.
Family members are more affectionate, caring, sensitive & watchful towards the children than anyone else outside. A child feels at ease, protective & comfortable with someone they know and hence do not hesitate to ask anything or talk about anything they need. The family members are usually uncle, aunt or grandparents at the most. When being at home with known and few people it reduces the risk of a child getting prone to any ailment or disease.
When a kid is kept at childcare center there is a lot of scope for a child to blend, interact, learn from other kids of their age.
They learn to socialize and come out of their comfort zone or shell and learn how to reciprocate to a response more effectively. This is very essential in an upbringing of any child else chances are that they remain timid or unresponsive most of the times. During this course of interaction with other kids there could be hidden skills or talent in a child that may be shown which otherwise parents do not see due to their busy schedule nowadays. It will be essential for parents then to motivate their children and encourage their talent and take it to the right direction.
To recapitulate a child's future can be best molded and guided well in childcare centers due to the various reasons listed above. A child is the future of any country and thus it is vital that are encouraged in a proper way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd thus it is vital that are encouraged in a proper way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, may, so, then, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56369426752 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.429380316 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6572334707 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.357142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278663030281 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918572628948 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107329881179 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15245643822 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138452463422 0.056905535591 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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