Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The world is a global village and socialization has evolved from physical contacts to virtual communications. It is generally believed that television raise the level of laziness and reduce interaction among the people. I do not agree with this assertion because television encourages learning and helps in relaxing.
Information is power and television promotes knowing happenings around the world. Different programs are being aired on the television ranging from news, movies, sports, religious activities and so on. Different segments of the society are targeted with this programs. For example, it is generally known that men loves watching football and women are always attracted to stations showing love films such as zeeworld. This program promotes learning and does not promote laziness. Innate skills are also developed in the process, example is food channel that teaches different cooking techniques. People watch and learn how to make different local and foreign cuisines.
In addition, the populace watch television to relax. Relaxation is good for everyone either students, business owners or corporate workers. It is generally acepted that "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy". While, in this is going on, people get to relax, share drinks and eat with family members. Also, they tend to call ,chat or text their friends and loved ones. Staying in touch and promoting Socialization.
In conclusion, television helps people relax after a long days work. it is generally suggested that television reduces productivity and communication among the people. In my opinion, I think television helps know abouhappenings around the world and it does not discourage socialization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54198473282 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92103204025 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645038167939 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7912996131 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4210526316 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7894736842 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143066415137 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404267760109 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268415701496 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891050350713 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300223212037 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.26 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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