Dear Sir,
I am writing in context to the order that I had placed through your website on 12th December. I had ordered two products from your online store. And, I am really disappointed with the company, as the item that I have received are different than that displayed on your site.
I had ordered one Pressure cooker with a nonstick bottom and another item was a King size Bed sheet. On opening the courier, I found that the cooker did not have the non stick coating, and rather it was simple stainless steel. And, the bed sheet that I saw on your website had a floral design, where as the one I received have criss-cross linings. So, i am really disappointed with the quality and disparity of the products.
I would really appreciate if you can take the order back and provide me with the original choice of products. Also, as I have paid the delivery charges for this order, I would want you to bear the returning charges and the cost of new delivery, as it was a mistake from your end.
I hope you will look in to this matter and give me the best possible solution.
Thank you.
Yours Sincerely,
Mary Anne
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...item that I have received are different than that displayed on your site. I had o...
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Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...aw on your website had a floral design, where as the one I received have criss-cross lin...
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Line 4, column 353, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... received have criss-cross linings. So, i am really disappointed with the quality...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4854368932 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39534455945 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567961165049 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5456337906 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244218027482 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959314643963 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695278246923 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133668949863 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586446373737 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.