Dear Sir,
I am writing to thank you for arranging such a wonderful party last week in your hotel at ball room. The arrangement was amazing and specially the seating arrangements was such that everyone could see the main screen clearly. The location was very suitable for elderly people as it is very close to the car park.
The food was awesome and covered both diet and not diet dishes, at the end the game show was really interesting and every one enjoyed it very much.
I would like to thank you for arranging such a nice event, special thanks to one your staff who provide excellent service to the guests.
Thanking you,
Sincerely
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...as it is very close to the car park. The food was awesome and covered both diet ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 26.3917525773 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 543.0 937.175257732 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 115.0 206.0 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72173913043 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.27472217062 3.78020617076 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31937674961 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 162.0 290.88556701 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.632528033 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205453229988 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990883109819 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705307515882 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116825933338 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733935671394 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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