You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my appreciation to your exceptional service during my grandmother's 90th birthday on the 24th of October at Grand Hyat Hotel.
First of all, despite my late reservation which is only one day before the event, I was impressed by the professional set-up and the excellent service from the staff. Within a short notice, the staff managed to decorate the hall based on my request - traditional Chinese concept. In addition to the brilliant set-up, all the guests were really pleased with the food that was served during the event. Finally, I would like to extend my thank you to all the staff for their friendliness and quick service. Without their professional attitude, my grandmother's birthday would have not been such a blast. All of my friends and family did have a well of a time last Saturday.
Once again, I would like to thank you and your staff for your outstanding service, and I look forward to having many more amazing experience with Grand Hyat in the future.
Your faithfully,
Diamond Nguyen
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, really, well, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88333333333 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68338850207 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.136281976 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114292175455 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462004175223 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376969889643 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877637406818 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230363552315 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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