You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
In this day and age people tend to think that in the future. they will choose to read news without over buying traditional newspapars or books to read. From my point of view. I totally disagree with this opinion. There are some reasons to account for this trend
On the one hand, Becouse not almost people also have their own phones or camputer to read newspapers online. some people are in poverty they do not have enough money to read printed books to keep themself updated with what is happening around them. Furthermore as for older generation they are quite illiteratechnology so they could not the way to use buttons the keyboard to search news. it is pretty inconvenient for them to keep track of information. For istance, my grandmather she is frustrated when taking a long times to search a kind of news to read and finally she no longer using it. Instead of that she bought newspapers to read
In addition to that using excessive texnological equipment like computer or phone couse damage to their eyes and have some adverse effects on their health in mentally and physically. For example as for children if make their eyes to be weaken and short - sighted. In terms of the older people , it enables them to be headache or dizzy when keeping constantly their eyes glued to the screen to read.
In conclusion , Although I have to admite that reading online have lots of advantages to people if does never replace the postition of printed newspapars or books. In the future, those are still popular due its benefits which have been brought to human life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...eople tend to think that in the future. they will choose to read news without over b...
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Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... or camputer to read newspapers online. some people are in poverty they do not have ...
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Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ted with what is happening around them. Furthermore as for older generation they are quite ...
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Line 4, column 390, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...se buttons the keyboard to search news. it is pretty inconvenient for them to keep...
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Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... - sighted. In terms of the older people , it enables them to be headache or dizzy...
^^
Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o the screen to read. In conclusion , Although I have to admite that reading ...
^^
Line 10, column 165, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...stition of printed newspapars or books. In the future, those are still popular due...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, still, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74817518248 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55794961973 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594890510949 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3996610908 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9285714286 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0569743772724 0.216113520407 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237844729986 0.0766984524023 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256002563446 0.0603063233224 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0368236457968 0.12726935374 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199670999767 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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