You read an article in a newspaper about a city/town. Some of the information in that article is wrong. Write a letter to the newspaper editions.
In your letter, you should:
describe how you know the city/town
tell what the problems are
suggest what you want the editor to do.
Respected Sir,
I intend to write this letter to grab your attention for an important and immediate rectification against an article published yesterday. I have read an article in your newspaper about the old walled city of Lahore and found incorrect information. I have lived in that town for almost 15 years and I am fully aware of its whereabouts and history. I certainly have some emotional associations with that place and cannot hold myself back to request you for the rectification.
In the article it is mentioned that the walled city was built in 1905 by the Mughal emperor Shah Jehan Zafar, however, the actual year was 1904 by the emperor called Babar. Moreover, it is also stated wrong that it took 9 years for the main building to be constructed for the emperor however, the actual years it took were 11.
It is quite important that people should know correct information about these historically enriched towns, therefore, request you to please write a letter of explanation with an intimation of rectifying the correct information in the newspaper tomorrow referring to the article no. at your earliest. I would be obliged if my request is catered to priority.
Looking forward to your outright response on this matter.
Yours Truly,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Respected Sir, I intend to write this letter to grab yo...
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Line 2, column 348, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y aware of its whereabouts and history. I certainly have some emotional associati...
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Line 4, column 42, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[5]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...t is quite important that people should know correct information about these histori...
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Line 6, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... response on this matter. Yours Truly, Sam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98104265403 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79001643897 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597156398104 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8682096486 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5454545455 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283153674449 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851023856645 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820365056927 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13937374297 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10408445988 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.