In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this era of constantly changing world situations, the aforementioned topic has its own significance that cannot be denied as youth seems unaware of the burning issues faced by most parts of the world. They are least bothered with the current affairs and issues that might haunt us in coming days like water scarcity, global warming, intense weather situations, etc.
First and foremost, we must look into the reasons of this attitude of our new generation. There could be various reasons for lack of interest of youth in reading newspapers or watching news on television. It has been observed that most of the kids in running days are fond of playing indoor games either on their computers or on smart phones. In addition to this, parents seems ok with their kids if they are spending their time in watching music, cartoons or kids channels instead of watching news or reading newspapers. In continuation, if we consider the way of presenting a news on TV channel, it is something which might be changed. By repeating same news on a channel makes it look bore for a youngster. They loss their interest in the news and often prefer to change the channel to get some entertainment.
To overcome this challenge we have to change the way of presenting news on TV as well as in newspapers. For instance, we should follow the trend of a channel’s viewership age group, i.e. if youngsters are more inclined towards entertainment, cartoon or kids specific channels, we can add a segment of current happenings around the globe in all such channels. Parents can play a vital part in this by encouraging their children to read more newspapers as this can help them enhancing their vocabulary and also develop habit of reading which will help them in their future. Newspapers can add pages for kids where they can get news on latest technology and gaming as this can help increasing the number of young readers.
To conclude this, it call for a collective effort of parents as well as of the channel and newspaper agencies to make youngsters convert to their medium to stay updated on current affairs and latest happenings around the globe.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 577, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...n, if we consider the way of presenting a news on TV channel, it is something which mi...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to enhance' or 'enhance'.
Suggestion: to enhance; enhance
...d more newspapers as this can help them enhancing their vocabulary and also develop habit...
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Line 3, column 684, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to increase' or 'increase'.
Suggestion: to increase; increase
... technology and gaming as this can help increasing the number of young readers. To conclu...
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Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'calls'?
Suggestion: calls
...of young readers. To conclude this, it call for a collective effort of parents as w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8310626703 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7390607516 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523160762943 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.159138973 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.642857143 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2142857143 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143782786804 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553419414867 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399939100359 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804818393537 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482749616623 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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