Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.
Do you agree or disagree?
Aforementioned topic is of utmost importance as it indicates towards one of the biggest dilemma which is being faced by a majority of overall population worldwide. Television, at one hand is a source of entertainment and awareness but at the same time I agree to the view that excessive use of this machine is making people less productive and out of touch with their loved ones. It has been observed that people used to sit in front of TV for hours and spend their time watching programs of their interest, whereas, they have no time to spend with their own family members.
In this era where technology has taken over almost every thing, we witnessed people who themselves ask their kids to watch Television so they can complete their chores. This ultimately makes the kids and parents habitual of doing this again and again. In addition to this, to make sure that kid must not disturb them during their task, they make sure to provide every thing in front of TV which eventually is becoming a main reason of laziness in kids and elders as well. As it is restricting them from developing habit of doing their own work.
In old days, people used to go out to spend leisure time where they can play outdoor or can meet their friends, whereas now they use to sit in a room and play games or watch movies for hours without even eating, drinking or interacting with anyone. This thing is not only damaging their health but also impacting on their bonding with their own family as well as friends. Secondly, they are missing the necessary part of nature habitat which helps create a better immune system.
To recapitulate, I must reinforce on the need of socializing as it helps us in making a better person and to create an enhanced and balanced society. We cannot eradicate the use of technology but we must not let it take over.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of laziness in kids and elders as well. As it is restricting them from developing ...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...an meet their friends, whereas now they use to sit in a room and play games or watc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61773700306 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48149262476 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553516819572 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7775307153 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.833333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151865164518 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564048084856 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429515618225 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856167155919 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434187601587 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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