You received a letter form an airline company for your feedback for your latest flight with them. Write a letter to the Customer Service Manager
• Say what reasons made you choose this airline.
• Something that you liked about the flight
• Suggest an improvement
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in respond to your request for a feedback regarding my latest flight with your airline company, and which I and my family enjoyed a lot.
First of all, I would like to begin with the reason for choosing your company for my latest flight. Although I travel a lot with another airline company, I decided to try your company as a friend of mine told about how much he enjoyed his flight with your company.
The thing I really liked about the flight is the installed movie player. Despite the fact that all airline companies have a movie player, your movie player has an interactive feature that allows passengers to choose what they want to watch. My children really enjoyed that.
However, it worth mentioning that the legs space between the seats are narrow and that bothered me and my wife a lot. I believe that widen the space between the seats would be a great improvement.
I look forward to hearing from you in the near future
Yours faithfully
Muhammad Ramzy
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, regarding, so, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68156424581 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30889198082 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620111731844 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3044141031 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1111111111 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346812489142 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12330447933 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109347401169 0.0603063233224 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161237171832 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115008675694 0.0580467560999 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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