many people regard films as a less important form of art than literature and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that movies are a less significant type of art when compared to literature and drawings. I totally disagree with the statement and shall point out the importance of movies and how it can affect our lives.
Firstly, movies have more powerful influence than literature and paintings in sending messages to the whole society. To elaborate on this, films consist of scenes that are originally taken from real life events. Thus, the majority of audience can relate to a story of a movie with a strong bond as the movie may touch a certain thought or memory. In addition, it is a primary source of inspiration and motivation for a lot of people. For example, the movie ‘Eddie the eagle’, starring Taron Egerton and Hugh Jakman, shows an inspiring story of a British skier, who became the first competitor to represent Great Britain in the Olympic ski jumping after facing a series of setbacks and disappointments from everyone around him.
Secondly, movies are more powerful tool when it comes to changing the opinion of masses towards a certain issue. To illustrate, though literature and painting enriches our lives, only a minority of the society would be interested in it. The majority of people would rather watch a movie than reading a book or observing the beauty of a painting. Thus movies can be used politically to increase the awareness of a certain issue or raise questions about another. For instance, the movie ‘Brave Heart’, starring Mil Gibson; was the about the wars that the Irish people went to against England for the independence of Ireland from Great Britain. The movie caused many protests in Ireland for months calling for independence again.
To conclude, despite the fact that all forms of art are important to the whole society, movies should be considered the most important and influencing type of art these days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01916932907 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74857698793 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581469648562 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7183606568 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.214285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131745560737 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479102544294 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501684784751 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972637957659 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453454589984 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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