Film is a less important form of art than literature and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people put forth the argument that film is a less valuable art form than literature and painting. Nevertheless, I completely disagree with this argument and I will elaborate on my view in this essay.
Nobody would deny that books and drawings have a much longer history than movies. Old art forms art forms are rooted in the ancient world and bring fruitful data to modern historians and anthropologists to conduct research on the customs and culture of our ancestors. However, an object’s historical value is not merely counted by the number of years it has been in existence, but also by the intrinsic value it possesses. Despite the fact that a film has a comparatively short history, it contains irreplaceable elements for us to witness how the modern technology evolves. For instance, from no sound in the olden days to surround sound effect in the modern world, movies have showcased the rapid advancement of technology over the past several decades.
From the perspective of entertainment / as far as entertainment is concerned, proponents of literature and paintings argue that they have higher value than films because the two art forms are manifestations of elegance and refined grace. Yet I believe that beauty is subjective and it depends on the tastes of individuals. While some people have a particular fondness for literature and painting due to their classic nature, others’ passion lies in watching movies which are deeply connected with the modern art form. Since modern people often follow the fashion trends of celebrities they adore and the high-end gadgets they use, going to the theatre is a highly rated entertainment and art form among people nowadays.
To conclude, I believe that films / movies have the same artistic value as literature and painting. One cannot gauge the artistic value of films merely from the number of years of history they have or some kind of subjective taste preference.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'art forms'.
Suggestion: art forms
... a much longer history than movies. Old art forms art forms are rooted in the ancient world and bri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11356466877 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85016942792 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561514195584 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7069488257 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.692307692 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220607918326 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783646120158 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081872588622 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138099903977 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600343030584 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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