In some societies the number of crime committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age teenagers who commit major crime receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that in some societies, the crime rate has been increasing among young children. Some people argue that teenagers ought to be given the same punishment that adults get, if they commit a major offense. However, I completely disagree with this point of view.
There are several reasons supporting the viewpoint why the adolescents should not be given the same punishment as adults. This is owing to the fact that teenagers have impressionable minds which help them to reform themselves easily. Put simply, a minor person is the one who can easily correct their behaviour with the help of counselling sessions. On the contrary, if the legal system gives them hard punishment, it can become difficult to change their criminal minds for the rest of their lives.
Statistics reveal that the number of young convicts who reoffend has declined over the years due to the effective behavioural therapies in rehabilitation centres. Another possible reason why teenagers should be saved / protected from serious punishments is that their mental ability to choose the right and wrong direction do not get developed in this age. That means, this is that time when they imitate others without knowing the consequences of their actions. Hence, it is an awful idea to put minors behind bars and give them rigorous punishment.
In conclusion, after analysing the situation it is not hard to see that juveniles can be easily reformed with counselling, it may not seem like a good idea to give strict punishment to them. Therefore, I believe that it is important to consider their age while giving penalty.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07547169811 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71655758545 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630188679245 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6647190943 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.461538462 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172229527841 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056941841342 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763728704238 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112517517624 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106831058792 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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