You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are away
Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Martin,
I am writing this to request my transfer to the head office in India. As you know, i have moved here to Canada around 2 years ago and have been working here continuously since then.
Recently, it came to my knowledge that there is a temporary position opened to an IT assistance at the head office in India, and i think this can be a great opportunity for me to move there for this duration, which is about six months, so i can spend some time with my parents while continuing my job there.
Further, regarding my current work, i just had a discussion with Saumya who has just returned from maternity leave. Since there is a backup person already deployed at her position, who will be continuing it for at least the next six months due to some dependencies, So Saumya is not that busy during this time and agreed to pursue my responsibilities until i return. Although she is new to this role, it would not be difficult to manage as i would be always there by all virtual means to guide her in-case of any issue.
I hope you would understand my situation. I would request you to please pass on my reference with your consent to the new manager so my application would be processed.
Your consideration would be highly appreciated.
Yours faithfully.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...there is a temporary position opened to an IT assistance at the head office in India,...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...stance at the head office in India, and i think this can be a great opportunity f...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...duration, which is about six months, so i can spend some time with my parents whi...
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Line 7, column 358, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eed to pursue my responsibilities until i return. Although she is new to this rol...
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Line 7, column 441, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... it would not be difficult to manage as i would be always there by all virtual me...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, then, while, at least, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6288209607 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73520051669 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602620087336 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.2800091659 44.8134815571 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.777777778 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213671598122 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920031983837 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307156149509 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115834149113 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168435484171 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.