You have recently ordered a book online, but the book was delayed and has not arrived yet. Write a letter to the company manager and say
– Give the details of your order.
– Explain why you need the book urgently.
– Suggest a solution for the situation.
Dear Sir\Madame,
I am writing this letter in regard to the online order, which i have placed on your website a few days ago for the English Grammar book. This book was supposed to be delivered yesterday, but somehow the delivery date got extended, and on the top of that i did not receive any update and reason for this unexpected delay.
For your information, my order number is 13782739, and this was placed on Monday, the 20th of Jul, and the book name is 'Essential Grammar' by Martin. Although i could have waited for this book without reporting any issue for this delay, i need this book on an urgent basis to prepare for the IELTS exam, which is already scheduled for the coming week, so i have to be preparing for the advanced vocabulary by now. However, due to this block, i am helpless now as i do not even have any other option currently to prepare for the exam.
I would like to request you to please check with your seller and expedite the delivery of this book and get it delivered by tomorrow. Please let me know if it is not possible, i will make some other arrangements.
I hope you will look into this matter on priority and provide an appropriate solution.
Thank you
Harpreet
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...te got extended, and on the top of that i did not receive any update and reason f...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s Essential Grammar by Martin. Although i could have waited for this book without...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...out reporting any issue for this delay, i need this book on an urgent basis to pr...
^
Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ary by now. However, due to this block, i am helpless now as i do not even have a...
^
Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...due to this block, i am helpless now as i do not even have any other option curre...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ease let me know if it is not possible, i will make some other arrangements. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53636363636 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44315539098 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4590626949 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.888888889 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283845212713 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117244818748 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741628393778 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152009821275 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793694285708 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.