In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?
The consumption of illegal drugs among players has increased in numerous professional championships, and they often do it in order to outperform in tournaments. This is mainly because of tough competition and extreme pressure to perform well to target the triumph. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with these participants who intake such forbidden substances.
Firstly, the prime reason why many champions choose to consume these drugs is immense pressure, which they often receive from their coaches, fans and other higher places to get success in the game at any cost. In other words, As we have witnessed in myriads of sports events if a player performs poorly even once in a while, he or she will receive so much hate from their followers and even their team members. Further, in current days, the battling at the playground has become exceedingly difficult, and winning a game seems like a battle for every player. As a result, they often resort to prohibited ways to elevate their performance and secure a place in the team.
There are two effective solutions to this problem of unauthorized drug use in professional sports. One way to tackle this is to make it obligatory to have a thorough drug inspection for all the sportsmen intermittently, and if someone tests positive, he should be suspended from the particular game event as a punishment. Although this would be a time-consuming process, it will ensure to eliminate such negative habits from these athletes. Another method of dealing with this offend is to enact some stringent laws to restrict this behaviour. For instance, If any player found taking such drugs at the sports facility, he will be suspended for the rest of his life. This solution would hopefully prevent them from consuming this illegal stuff because of the fear of suspension and losing their image in front of an entire world as a result.
In conclusion, having strict rules and frequent drug tests would be effective methods to restrict athletes from taking such barred substances.
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Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05278592375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81176470567 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2558146389 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.071428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119944121858 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433804418665 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328161174818 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683350454987 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256929669116 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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