You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I am writing this to express my dissatisfaction with the accommodation provided at the college campus. First of all, i have requested for a single occupancy for myself in the application form and paid extra fees for the same. However, i have to share room with another student now but i did not make any complaint about it. However, from last few days, i am facing some problems with my roommate, which are not at all acceptable, as it is impacting my study and personal schedule.
Further, although i have put all the efforts to solve this issue at my level, but things are out of my hands now. My roommate seems to be a party animal, as she often comes late in the night and usually bring her friends for night outs, which creates turbulent in my study, as well as, personal space. Not to mention, yesterday she took my laptop to her friend's place without my consent, and broke its screen. Although she is ready to bear the entire cost, it creates a chaos in my routine since then, as i had to go to cybercafe to do my assignments. So i would request you to please allot me a single occupancy if possible. If it is not doable, i can share the place with some other student who would not create such troubles for me.
I would really appreciate your prompt action to this matter.
Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully.
Harpreet
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...share room with another student now but i did not make any complaint about it. Ho...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... about it. However, from last few days, i am facing some problems with my roommat...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...es a chaos in my routine since then, as i had to go to cybercafe to do my assignm...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o to cybercafe to do my assignments. So i would request you to please allot me a ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...pancy if possible. If it is not doable, i can share the place with some other stu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, then, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51821862348 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52908469666 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.83505154639 381% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0981601168 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169313375727 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711629395584 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615297501315 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115543946796 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550383821541 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.