Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it is thought by many that the discrimination based on gender-type in the nation's army forces or police department should be outlawed, and there should be fair opportunities for women in these professions.
The women's fight for equity in every realm has been an ongoing agenda for a decade, and when it comes to serving a community as a soldier or police officer, prospects are relatively inadequate for them. People who claim that women must participate evenly to military services and police, consider that a prejudiced system for designating roles based on their sex has to be terminated, and suitable candidates should be selected based on their aptitudes and individual talents. Moreover, many females have shown their expertise in multiple onsite jobs as a warrior or police officer. Not only this but also, many have travelled to space for exploration and find a new life. For instance, Kalpana Chawala ' an Indian scientist' was the first woman who arrived at the moon.
On the flip-side, notwithstanding the above-mentioned contentions, many individuals still deem that these sorts of jobs are not created for women because they are physically incompetent and vulnerable for facing such intense situations. Furthermore, being sensitive is a downside of a female's persona, and they can easily be diverted by their family primarily their children. To cite an example, numerous females give-up their profession post their pregnancy. As a consequence, reliability at the job goes for a tose most of the time in-case female employees.
To conclude, in my opinion, being fairly employed across all job functions and given impartial opportunities for all occupations including .. army as veteran or police-officer is a basic right of women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, as to, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36462093863 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08154993511 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628158844765 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8177196674 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19487742315 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695682455736 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480363419614 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121091414628 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314799657074 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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